Sunday, March 1, 2009

In Vino Veritas


she has been a fool
letting herself fall
in a pitch black abyss
cold and alone
she waits

shattered
as she tries to
stand up
no one to help
she hopes to die

a price she paid
for a crime committed
in that abyss she waits
for death 
to set her free

she tried to escape
but her feet failed
her bones broke
tears fall
she waits

punishment
for letting herself
commit a crime
only a fool
could've done

shattered
she breaks down
her heart pounds
she regrets
everything

her silent screams
only the walls could hear
she sees nothing
fate had played a game
and it won

she wanted to speak
to shout
her feelings
they were never heard
it was a crime

there is no forgiveness
to her foolishness
there's no escape
in the abyss
called love

4 comments:

  1. LOVE is bittersweet.

    It can pull you up and push you down.

    It makes you cry but can make you celebrate life.

    LOVE.

    Ok lang yan kate.

    Everyone experiences that.
    Just be thankful that you were given the chance to feel it. :)

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  2. yeah... a bittersweet experience indeed...

    thanks Tzu :D

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  3. oh.. waw.. @__@
    I think... I find the persona smart
    in this poem..

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  4. hi soujee... hehehe
    smart? O.o
    thanks for passing by :D

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